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MAN 1: The Void

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Um.
Vote fairly.
Based on a conversation I had with Nightmare.
Yes I know I just submitted a cool flash and then this load of crap. :P

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((( MUSIC DIDNT FIT )))

~~REVIEW~~
The music didnt seem to fit the animation, and i alos noticed that the "TEXT" was cutting off into the screen when it gets long wording or something, and it was sorta short, but funny i thought...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the "TEXT" so it doesnt cut off on the ends, aswell as puting a solid color backing to the text so its easier to read...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat muddin / clock flash but needs some re-working...

~X~

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Yah, I did that overflowing text thing on purpose. YOu're the first one to say something about it.

Nice idea

I thought this was a good start and since I have not watched the rest of the series I will go and do that. The idea was nice and there was not may things wrong with it. If I were to give you anything to change I would say use a normal clock face not a red and black one, as it looks bad. It was funny how you managed to create a good flash while not even changing the background and that is some achievement.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Because it was a short cartoon.
The background didn't even matter. All I had to do was just add a new one.
:D

A good start to another series

Here I am, starting to review your next series called MAN, and what better characters to have it based around than Muffins and Nightmare? Once again, good drawings, could use some more animations though. Sound was good, but at one point the subtitles went off the screen just a tad, there wasn't too much you couldn't read though. The movie was a little short, and I'm not sure about what the void is, but this movie was mildly funny.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

The Void is a movie by Blue Clock.
It's one of the finest series ever created. Go watch it.

dude.......

stop sniffing pens dude

ur a crazy fool but i like it

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

I don't sniff nuthin'!

Not no moa!

Thanks!

I like more the MAN 2

I dont know why but the second like me more and this is very good too.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

The second one is probably a lot funnier.