drawings?

ok...i'll give you credit for the poetry and the theme and even for the music but i think your little drawings could need some improuvement aside from that...good job, its pretty artistic poetry-wise

Heh heh, you use a nightlight...

Too bad Daily2oons is finished, they coulda had some fun with this.

sorry but

i hate emos, like that other guys review, seriously whats with all the angst, surely ur life cant be that bad, (no worse than mine) so i mean, whatevers bothering u, well, suck it up

Pretty Original

I think it must be the first time i watched a poem based flash. The music fits nicely, but i think you could improve it by adding a voice who reads the poem along, that would be perfect :)

hmmm...

seemed a little goth-esque (lol) but i liked it.