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Desert Garden

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Not without its flaws, this is an animated song I made. It is the byproduct of 3 days of toil and fairly simplistic. There are things about it I'm too lazy to fix, but as my 2nd flash, I think it's pretty damned good. It's my first foray into lip sync and the right hand movement (strumming) looks crap, also the way he's playing the song is nothing like how it's really played, I just stylised it for non-guitarists. For the guitar playing audience, that's my dream guitar, a Gretsch White Falcon.

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((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
I actually liked the song, it did however seem slow, and the guy didnt move much you should have him walk down an aisle or something and show the crowd he is singing to, and subtitles wouldnt hurt...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes in the flash, with more animation from the character, and All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
Good video almost like your there in front of him kinda neat flash...

~X~

Pretty cool song

The song is actually pretty good. I wouldn't mind listening to it again, but the flash itself isn't very interesting. I'm just listening to the song as i write this.

The lip syncing was very good though. Even during the humming part it was good. The arm movements ant stuff are a bit clumsy, but using tweens for them will usually look that way.

Anyway, nice work overall. It would be a good base for a clip based on this song. Like you could have him singing, then flashbacks to other things happening or something. Just an idea.

Spellbinding.

That song was absolutely mystical. I want to own that music video in my downloads on my website.

man, I love VAST...

the lip synching was pretty good, other than that there really wasn't a whole lot to it. I'd love to have seen at least some cuts to close-ups. The same movie could be revamped to occasionally cut to a close-up of the head or guitar giving you an opportunity to practice more precise movement w/o the difficulty of doing the whole thing in perfect synchronization.
All in all, a fine effort; not great. Chosing VAST forced me to give you a higher score than the movie as a whole deserves.

It was a good song

Did you write the song, because I am basing this score on the assumption that you wrote this song yourself. It was an excellent song, but the flash was lacking. You did a very good job with the lip synching however, and that is one of the more difficult things to pull off. Work at adding more to your entries. This was decent.

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1,855
Votes
9
Score
3.24 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 6, 2005
12:28 AM EDT