((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Needs more to it, like some color even if it was just alittle, and it also seemed abit short, also seems like it was put together in 5 minutes, it had some ok drawings just needs more effort and detail...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting drawings but needs abit more effort and detail...

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