((( NEEDS MORE )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but it was very bland, needed more, and some color for sure, even a pinch of color woul have been neat, it was short and simple, hope to see more on your work soon...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W... I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...
~~OVERALL~~
Short but has a neat style to it, still needs more...
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