can do beta
da loading page n da name lacks creativity ... n add som humor .. can do much beta... u hav da potential .. btw nice story
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Im kinda week in objects and stuff, if u guys have some idea pls be welcome. and let me know the weak points so i can try it on next one. thnx
not too bad
well, it had a good start to it and it was alright to watch, but this one was too short and thats why i think this one has such an unfair score. this one had potential but this one was just too short and i feel that it hurt this one.
Just not my style.
OK this wasn't BAD, but i just didn't find anything good either... And the part where that guy runs towards the camera made me cry.
meh
not terrible, but the sound effects were really bad.
Nice job
Some grammar work and thats about all I can think of.Its nice.
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3.00 / 5.00
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- Oct 3, 2005
- 1:35 AM EDT