meh

wellllll i think enough work and it should do ok the character consepts seem to be fine too short and its kinda...........wierd 5/10 for effort

((( LOOPS ... ?? )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well the fact it loops kinda ruins it, and there was not much to go with either, there was some color but not much with all that being said it didnt make much sense either

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more content and , You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
fix the looping and add more content, funny song though...

~X~

cool

is this going to be like a series? Because i always like new series. I hope you keep worken at this because i think it will be pretty good. I know i like it.

good job

u have alot of potential! just keep practicing!!! u could be the next vinne viertas (if u dont know who im talking about u dont deserve to be on newgrounds noob) lol! im excited to see ur future works!
keep trying! ur almost there!!

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Pointless

Completely pointless crap. I mean, god dam. Zoom-out+a little animation=pointless, mind-numbing crap.