((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
You are right it is short, and for that amount of size it needs much more content, the animation was ok but could look better, as for the graphics notbad but could look sharoer, anyways notbad but needs improvment...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, better details, and You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice flash but needs to be smoother and sharper, and some compression is needed...

~X~

way to short

this was good but then when i finally anticipated for the storey to go on it stops this was much too short for your next one please make it much longer the graphics wernet bad and i didnt mind the use of sprites but since it was so short 5/10

Well it was okay.... for a short.

I honestly think that you shouldnt present just that little bit at the start. It doesnt really make you feel like watching the rest.

The width screwed it up for me though. Bleah.

Well, good luck and I hope you'll finish the plot with the rest of the episodes. (I have tried sprite animation myself, XD)

Horrible

As my spanish teacher said, "MUY MAL!!" That flash was so pointless, so boring, so short (excluding that making this trash flash short was a blessing in diguise), and made no sense. Nothing even happened, please someone, delete this submission from NG.

good start...

Ok start from the looks of it, just get another episode...