((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, and had some good "ART" and some decent shadinings even the backrounds were nice, as for the story, abit short but funny, made me laugh at the end result, just wish it wasnt so short, anyways nice flash, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, add more stuff going on, and more humor aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute just abit short for me...

~X~

good try

it was good for a start you should continue this

lol

this was pretty funny. With a little more stuff this could've wound up on the front page.

Nicely done

A cute little film rather unlike alot of the stuff on newgrounds.

Graphics: Quirky and cute. Very smoothly animated. You have your own style.

Audio: Nicely inserted sound effects.

Keep up the good work

-Rhabdophobia

Yes! Cartoon!!

I love stuff like this; short, sweet, comical; some of the greatest cartoons are made from this stuff. Yet so original; keep up the good work!