((( COMPRESS )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well needs some compressing, actually needs lots of compressing, it was just too huge for the little content, but if you are going to submit something as huge you should spend abit more time with setailing all aspects of it from character like characters and detailed backrounds...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, but most of all some compressing of the huge file...
~~OVERALL~~
A large file with little detail and content...
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