hmm here my 2nd flash movie.. i already fixed about the sound issue.. but im still fixing the dialoge part.. cant seem to understand how to make message and botton together.. hehe .. anyways this movie is kinda short and fast.. thats all Enjoy (^_^)
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This is in need of a lot of work. The sound effects, especially the ones in the beginning sound way too deliberate and unnatural. The text that came up sometimes was hard to read against the background you chose and I couldn't read half of it. The animations were decent, though nothing impressive or interesting, especially from a sprite set. A very generic movie that was not too interesting to watch.
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i agree with the dude just below me. the one with the face icon.
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad on this one, i have seen many slug flashworks all good and all funny and with lots of action, as for this one it could use some better text lines? maybe better yet some text bubbles, anyways funny flash and good action...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better text bubbles...
~~OVERALL~~
Slugs cant get better then that...
~X~
neato
i liked it, to short and the good guys were idiots but ok w/e
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You said you didn't know how to do the button and other thing together. It's actually quite easy. Make the text box a button, and on the frame that the text box thing is on, put a stop(); in the actions panel. Then, on the button, I believe it's on. press( next frame(); or something, you might want to look it up because I'm pretty bad on my actionscript. Also, work on sounds and how people die next time :P.