Lol

Cool nice and it had Doki's Style of cartooning

Good job

Thats one of the most best things i have seen on this site in a while.Great job on the music side complimented the flash well.Its good to see people arent just making video game parodies and dress up games but using there head to make quilty stuff.

Hmmm

Ok, a few little complaints. First off, your graphics could use a little work. They are almost good, but its just too sketchy.
The music was also a bit bland and boring. To tell you the truth the whole flash was kinda boring. You just flashed visions of death, leaving people confused. I understand the concept of dark gothic like flashes, but this just doesnt cut it. I got confused and bored, and it didnt leave me with the "damn that was deep" or "whoa that was twisted" feeling i was expecting to get. I read your review that you made for David Firth. To tell you the truth im not much of a david firth lover myself, however he does make his flashes somewhat amusing to watch due to his randomness. I wasnt sure if your flash was suppose to be deep, funny or what. It was just kinda, unsettled if you know what i mean. You didnt add a storyline that the audience could follow, and you didnt add anything really funny. Adding gore and dark violence to a flash, does not make it interesting or fun to watch. I apoligize for being so harsh, but this is the opinion of a dedicated watcher of Newgrounds.

Very tasty

Great flash... make more movies without evil alien looking muggers and ill give you 10 points :D

Graphics 7: The child walking made me think of puppies... bad puppies... he was too stiff and i dont like the facial features of your guy in some of the scenes... some times he rocks though :D

Style: 10: What else can i say but OMFG!!!!1!!1!!11shift1 Your style rivals that of stupid fat ppl in chairs that say "Director" just the way he walks up heavens gate and all that stuff happening (not wanting to give much away) makes me have simutanious orgasms

Sound 7: Its a great style of sound but i find the exact choice too slow at times

Voilence 10: mwahahahaha... blood

Overall 8: You deserve it

Good job

That was pretty good for your first flash. It was pretty twisted but good none the less. Keep'em coming!