Not bad but...
You kind of made a 2 or 3 minute cartoon drag on for 5 minutes. Get through the scenes quicker and get punchier on the jokes and your next one will def be better ;)
about a year worth of drawing in history class crammed into 5 minutes. yep.
Not bad but...
You kind of made a 2 or 3 minute cartoon drag on for 5 minutes. Get through the scenes quicker and get punchier on the jokes and your next one will def be better ;)
it was ok
the animation was pretty darn good and the idea wasnt that bad. but the story line was kinda pointless. the bathroom part was pretty funny though but got dull after the first 10 seconds. but as far as it goes with the art and animation it was really good
the bit with Al Gore was good
the bit with al gore was the funniest thing ever! the rest wasn't too good though.... I got bored waiting for him to get off the bog
A Mind Is A Terrible Thing To Waste
Pay attention in your history class, son.
Needs to be worked on
You have a lot of talent with your graphics, but your sound quality needs to be improved, and most of all, your story. I think if you come up with a really original idea and improve things, I think you'll have a great movie.
Actually, the sound quality is about as high as you can take it with flash...
Thanks for liking the graphics, I can draw a lot better than think of good storylines. Blargh.