((( INTERESTING )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, and i guess you made some changes to it, but like i said it was interesting and somewhat entertaining, and for your first few flashworks it was not that bad, could use more though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail is needed, more time on it, and you need to compress it somewhat, as best as you can...
~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash kinda different, but still interesting...
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