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Simple Tut 1.5

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New grafics, more breif, etc. enjoy.

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It was OK

Could use some graphic improuvements, and spelling improuvements.



That good but fix the

text. I used zoom but some people here are too lazy to do that (or too dumb to think that)



all right

thanks though i really needed to know how to make a scrolling background :)



My opinion is limited in its validity

However I think its not too bad with some improvment.Your grammar needs a bit of work as you get pretty confusing when you use "an" instead of "a".

You say "This is AN good piece of pie"

You SHOULD say "This is A good piece of pie"
Got it?(simple english tut lol)

I dont know much about script at all so I cant judge that part but the artwork thing seemed ok so I gave you some points for it.I hope that you will improve your english.Script must be confusing enough without being instructed with bad grammar.


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Uploaded
Sep 20, 2005
9:30 PM EDT
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