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The Fireman's Daughter

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COMING NEVER 2006
THE FIREMAN'S DAUGHTER
AMAZING VERY LONG PREVIEW HERE MAKE SURE YOU WATCH THE WHOLE THING. I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DON'T DO THAT.WHEN THEY DON'T WATCH THE WHOLE THING.I HATE IT. SO MUCH. ANGRY.

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nothing to good but i like it

for sum reason i coodnt hear it

[K]

Sometimes people want things to make sense and be able to stand alone. I am not one of them. Looping this was brilliant. I want to have this flash playing on a small flat-screen monitor in a small alcove in my house surrounded by aquariums.

xtil responds:

good luck with that

I agree with the previous review...

Graphics-Friggin awsome. The lightening and rain effects were supreme.

Style-As the previous guy said, this isn't much of a preview....I didn't really get anything out of it. Put more plot into it.

Sound-Good. Fit well with the flash.

Overall-You have half a perfect flash. Sweet graphics and sound. All you need is more plot to make it interesting. Make it longer and put more information into it. Let us know something about "what was wrong," at least.

xtil responds:

There's a lamp in my pants

Can this even constitute as a preview?

It was like 10 seconds long, there wasn't even enough story in here to keep me interested. Don't know if you've seen a movie preview, but in those, you have a bit of story, and a bit of intro to the characters. This submission lacked both. Now granted, you did say, "something was wrong," but after hearing that, it just went downhill and reminded me of those cliche Goosebumps stories I used to read as a child.

Try harder next time.

xtil responds:

HITLER WAS A GOOD MAN

Um

Yeah dude, nothing happens. And from reading your reviews you dont sound serious about this. Good drawing but I dont think your being serious.