wonder woot! to thee rescue!

okay grammar check is needed you got a good idea plot i canot think of anythingelse because i got a extreme headacke going ill tell you when i can think straight

O.O

It was awesome. You should make more of these.... just with better graphics and less tweens. Everything else was pwn.

heh, i liked it!

Of course with the style your score is limited but for a first flash it was great! Good choice of music at the end btw :P

good stuff

I especally liked the end, very manly!!!

The way you animated things gave me an idea for how to do my next cartoon, maybe.

Pretty damn spiffy

This is a good example of a well-rounded flash. It wasn't anything over-the-top, and that's fine. You didn't try for phenomenal, earth-shattering graphics; you stuck with what worked. You didn't try to make it overly funny; it did what it was supposed to do. Just a funny piece about two circles fighting each other for no reason, and it was good.

I liked how you timed the break in music with the end of the fight sequence. Little things like that stand out to me.

One thing I would suggest is adding in a few background effects and some additional graphics that could spice things up, like having a power-up style background for the fireball section, or spin the shuriken a few times up close.

Just keep those things in mind when doing another one. It's good, but I'm sure you can do even better. Keep up the good work.