into another situation
++++ I love how the guy clenches at the newspaper. Great touch.
+++ Also like the swinging hair.
-- I think the lipsynch could have been done better. I've not done much, but I think you should've had the teeth/tongue maybe show for 'nn' of 'wanna'. Also, when I'm viewing, the speech just doesn't match up. Maybe it's because your style is realistic so any flaws are more pronounced? I'm not sure...
Didn't laugh, but I did find it interesting to see the line (of speech) placed into another situation.
For me, the clenching totally made the movie.