You've done better stuff but...

...insted of looking at the negative side of this submission i prefer to loook at the positive aspects like the music, it was very well chosen, the graphics, were OK, not great, but ok. But you made that incredibely ahem...dumb mistake: "their", not "there".

I think you've got potential to do better stuff, keep working^.~

arggh! "their" not "there"

I'm sorry, it's just a pet peeve I have, and seeing the misspelling of that word in every flash just makes me cringe. Anyway, I won't be a dick and give you a 0 for that mistake. You did well...graphics could use some improvement but the music choice was fitting.

Could be bether

It looks more like an introduction than a movie...
I appreciated this but would want some more just to understand where you wanted to bring me...
Your movie was not animated a lot... that was more like a moving picture.
Anyway you interested me and for that I gave you 3.

Spelling was awful.

I loved the intended storyline and the animation was fairly well done also, however, I found it extremely annoying and difficult to comprehend with spelling/grammar errors in every sentence. I would have voted much higher if it was grammatically correct. You need to work on the spelling and grammar, but everything else was awesome!

You go, boyeee...

Very very nice. Average graphics but you have great storyteller ability. Loved the music. It dragged a little around the "younger deities" line/lines, but I can't blame you for wanting to follow the beat of the music. I am intrigued! This was a rellay good first submission. Not everything is about monster graphics. Btw, I think you meant "Their" on the reproduction line. Keep up the good work!