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I would have rather had some voices for the characters rather than text or at least some sort voices that would accompany the text. The artwork was not all that bad, but it is a shame that the movements were limited to a lip movement and a cup dropping to name a few. The John William's theme from the film "Halloween" added a different feel for this movie, while I previously would have assumed it was a revenge movie - when the music makes if feel sort of like a horror-esque theme. I am interested in knowing the rest of the plot for the movie - what else can happen? It shows promise, keep up the good work.

Ryan

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well not great but it might be a contender for underdog of the week

sucked

dude actually work on things for more than 45 minutes and dont post ur flash especialy to newgrounds unless ur really good

I'm not sure what to say

Well I didn't find it good at all. It left me lost and confused =/

Promising

Thoroughly enjoyed it until the hero attacked, up to then had style and suspense and simple but effective effects (and bad grammar).

After then it got a bit confused and the graphics seemed to be simple bad drawings rather than simple stylizations
Cheesy plot
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