Too artsy
When I see an "artistic" piece, like this one, especially when it uses so many pictures, I tend to believe that the author has little or no skill with animation, storyboarding, script writing, or drawing, let alone being able to make a cohesive film.
First, the movie has no point. It's just there.
Second, there is little to no animation.
Third, some of your images are such low quality that they pixelate. It's one thing if you're spoofing a video game, it's something completely different when you generate your own content and fail to account for resolution.
Fourth, people don't like to read, they don't like subtitles, and you should realize that. Having to read detracts from the art and animation experience and breaks the viewer's ability to concentrate on the movie as a whole.
No sir, I don't like it. I Don't like it one bit.