Good
This was pretty good animation and I liked it. One thing though...In the beginning when talking about being struck down you spelt "struck" wrong. Sturck is not a word I know of lol
Author Comments
yes i no this has many bugs but im fixing that in my new 1, part 2 is gona be much much better
Theif: The Dark Project
Not bad, but Garret does not have a knife untill "Theif: Deadly Shadows"
god damnit!!!
I was working on project Thief 2 and ... DAMN!!!By the way he is thief, not a murder.
p.s. kool movie
((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, the detail in the backrounds like the "FIRE TORCH" and the jpeg backrounds mixed with art work was an awsome idea, allthough the sticks could be better detailed, a very impressive flash though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the sticks give them some detail some face features more animation and more ideas to bring them to life...
~~OVERALL~~
A great flash cant be missed, must see as it combines great ideas to make one awsome flash...
~X~
Manfreak responds:
Heh, did you notice how I took some of your suggestions and others here on board for my new thief animation? A whole 5 years later lol. Looking at your reviews I see you are a great critic. Thanks for your help here :D
decent enough
good choice of music but the voice acting let it down... I could tell you were trying real hard but some people just have crap voices... no offence or anything, just get someone you know with a cool voice to do the acting.
otherwise nice style, i thought the thief was a bit over-animated at times (the sneaking looks like dancing) and he didn't need to shoot out that second torch at !!!point blank range!!! but still, fix those few things and you're onto a winner. more please ;>