You need practise.

I assume this is one of your first flashes? Any way there are a few easy things you can do to make this better. A decent background for one. Make it longer I guess. Learn some new things about flash.

it was aiight

waz up lil man. i donno why nobody aint review ya movie. It was dope; the rabbit acted crazy(like its name), but no action. Next time, make more action between pacman and crazy bunny.

Hope others review your shit like I did.