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Ryan and Jonny - Cake

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Hi, my name is BluePaw and this is my first flash. It is the first in a series and I hope you like it! :-)

I am a relitively new animator so rate fairly but truthly.
Check out my site soon!
bluepaw

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i thinky

u did a great job needs to be better qual thou and i reckon that, that was the only thing wrong with and i think as u do more it will get funnier etc etc.

((( HMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well what can i say it was funny but needs some fine tuning more depth and detail and more time to improve on, but it was funny and did make me laugh so it was not all bad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort ith each area and more detail for sure...

~~OVERALL~~
Something with an ok idea just needs more time and more effort...

~X~

woo

lol

benny hill is the reason this didnt get below a 5

benny hill theme saved your ass

:)

that was even better than moter man...so i 5'd this!!!

you rock dude...keep up the good work!!!

Credits & Info

Views
2,977
Votes
21
Score
3.53 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 5, 2005
4:54 PM EDT