Nice
Ur roof top Turbolasers didn't look like Turbolasers. Still a very good video.
Author Comments
This is an animation that i did for a contest in venezuela... in a tv channel.. i´m very proud of it.. !! ^_^ !! It´s located just before Episode I... when Obi wan and Qui Gon travel like embasadors to naboo.. so.. obi wan is training just before that... the dialog is this..
Qui gon: "Obi wan"
Obi wan: "Si maestro" (yes master)
Qui gon: "Has estado entrenando muy duro!" (You have been training very hard)
Obi wan: "Gracias maestro" (thanks master)
Qui gon: "El consejo nos pidio ir a una mision diplomatica al planeta naboo.. alistate de inmediato"
(The council ask us to go in a diplomatic mission to the naboo planet.. get ready !!)
Obi wan: "Si maestro.. enseguida.. !!" (Yes master.. right now !!)
And that conects it to the Star Wars film .. ^_^ i hope you like it.. !!
coments are very usefull.. !!
Atomic
interesting
quite good, i liked it, the idea of them being toys was original, and the ending wasn't great, the no violence for a change was cool, but not great graphics. the sound wasn't great i couldn't tell if it was english, and the humor was nothing. just plain action was great. overall, a 7.
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Well this was notbad, it was neat, i liked it more for the story then anything else, he animation could be abit sharper though, but it does keep you interested, nice work, hope to see more soon...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sharper animation, and more detail within characters and backrounds...
~~OVERALL~~
A neat take on starwars, nice flash for all, good story...
~X~
Quite an animation!!!
Great! Though I'm not the best Star Wars fan, I liked this animation (even though I did'nt know the story). There are things to improve like the resolution of the video and the sound quality and volume. But other than those, the animation is quite good.
Keep up the work!
i liked it
this has to be one of the better starwars things made. i like the way it looked. there are a few things that you could work on.
1 im not sure what the video settings are for whatever program you are running but most of the things people put on here are way to blurry. maybe you should practice with setting the dpi levels different and seeing if you can make it clearer. and the voices could be a bit louder.
other than that you have a a+ flash
nice job
happy flashing!!!