Good but needs improvement

Well I love your sense of animation and the phrase: "psychologically deformed." Overall very interesting, and I understand about the audio, but that really took points from your work. Nonetheless I would really hope to see a continuation, especially now, five years after it was originally posted, I bet your skills have improved vastly, and hopefully now you could provide us with a greater quality work. In conclusion I would like to see more from you.

((( COULD BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but could be improved, the "AUDIO" needs some work, and some of the effects but overall i was entertained...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ring down the filesize abit, work on more effects and detail, and the audio could be of more quality...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting flash with some work needed, nice job though...

~X~

good sense of personal style...

your sound was a bit rough around the edges, but your sense of personal animation style is good and solid...
and yes, it is very short and ends abruptly...at a v ery random point in the animation too...there is no real clue as to what is going on...it really does seem like you gave up halfway :s

if that's the case, push forwards and try to get this done..hope to see more from you in the future...

Hard To Belive

Its really hard to belive thats all in the first ep. This ended way to abroubtly the first episode should draw you into the story and make you want more but this just makes me think that i wasted some time. Im sure that this could be good if you spent more time on it. Dont give up half way through (wich it looks like you did) finish the first episode becouse this was incredibly short and didnt explain much at all.

ehhh

yeah