Lot of improving needed...
Okay. Several things I have to say about this movie:
1. The sound quality was terrible. You need to speak louder and more clearly. I had real trouble understanding what was said because the voices were really quiet and you tended to talk pretty fast and mumble.
2. The singing suffered the same problem. Being a singer myself, I know that you need to project your voice when you sing. In other words, sing loudly! Don't be ashamed of your singing voice. Not everyone is Timo Kotipelto, you know.
My advice would be to add subtitles, and in future, speak louder, or turn the volume on your microphone up. Another thing: it was kinda boring. It didn't really feel like it was going anywhere. So, you get a 2 from me. Nothing too new or interesting.