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These frame by frame flashworks are really good, but they always lack backround effects, this one was ok, but could still be improved on, aswell as lowering the filesize it was abit much, nice job though...

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meh...

Ive seen better...

WTF?

First time using brush?!

Then what about your other FBFs?

Nice FBF there anyway. Someday we could collaborate...?

Sorry Man.

The entire thin was just lines. The basic plot: A line enters the screen, circles around for a few seconds, then explodes. Two lines enter and circle around eachother. They exit. Two more lines come, form into arrows, then explode.
No detail in the lines, no, just single brush strokes. It looks like that you spent about three seconds on each frame for 75% of the movie. Lines circling around are amusing for about five seconds.

Nothing really new....

Well, you reallly need to work on smoothing out the FBF a lil', learn to use onion skins, and frame rate of 30 (very smooth), or frame rate of 24. Try and do something better then lines. The sound was good, but like I said, nothing too new...Keep at it, you'll get a lot better ^_^.