GOOD begginning man!
nice!
Author Comments
-Be aware, this basically was my first real flash movie I ever made(prolly back in 2003)
This is actually a cartoon I made a few years back(I submitted it on my old username). I touched it up, and added some things, as well as matched the music to the cartoon. I hope you enjoy it. To hear a band play the song, go to www.myspace.com/joesoup . I enjoy reading reviews, and suggestions, so please leave them.
This doesn't get many review huh?
Well this was your first real animation huh? I don't even remember where I left my first real animation, I should clean my room more often.
It was really good, the music really brought out the animation, like most your flashes. The animation was pretty much describing the tone of the song. It was enjoyable.
I can tell why you put the paper as a backround. maybe it was a way of getting lazy and not having to color the characters or just cuz it looks good. Either way it came it well.
ActiveObjectX responds:
My first attempts at animation were on post-its in middle school, which I still have.
Absolutely Loved It!
That was great! The drawing was so... original. Kinda like an animated newspaper cartoon. I loved it!
ActiveObjectX responds:
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Interesting...
You seem to have a certain style of animation in mind, and I felt that you were a little off from what could have been. I would see if you could refine your animation to avoid the more unusual (and normally impossible) limb positions, as well add somewhat more detailed backrounds to certain points, as you watch most of this short film on a plain white backround.
Other than that, it was a farily nice thing to watch a few times, which is a lot more than I can say about the vast majority of things I have seen before. I could imagine a series of similar cartoons in the future, if you wanted to do that.
ActiveObjectX responds:
Well, I'll respond to this review backwards. This character is taken out of context. He is a character from a series of yearly comic strips I wrote. So you did look into this animation correctly in that I was aiming for something and that kinda thing. But this cartoon is very different than those comics. This cartoon was really my first attempt at a flash cartoon.
Even today i still havnt gotten better at keeping the whole proportion thing in mind heh.
niceeee
loved it, nice drawibng, nice etc...lol
ActiveObjectX responds:
cool comment, nice revibew, nice ect...lol