Nice
Nice but you need more practice
Author Comments
some stuff came out not good...
well its my first work so i jess its not that bad...
next movies will be better-with more action and less talking...all the talking is because its an intro to the rest of the movies...hope you like it...and in reviews please tell me what i did worng...so i will do it right next time...
///nice anyway
...damn nothing lol
Not bad
Thats an alright intro. Now make the rest of the story 2 c how it goes 4 audiences like us
Good try
Considering that was your first time I think it was good...
I like the way you decided to make up your own names for the characters.
Keep it up!
Good
It was good for a first timer. Next time try to make the text when they talk appear slower. I couldn't read it all.
