mehh..... work on it.....
note that that didn't suck, but it wasn't great either. work on it, develop your skills, have perseverance, and you'll be better before you know it :)
also i think Underoath's later stuff (from Define the Great Line) is just better. it's fine if YOU think otherwise, but just know that some users may favor their other heavier stuff.
to 'hurt-becomes-hate': if you pay attention to the credits at the end, he DOES give the song the correct title.