Good concept, not-so-good presentation

I watched it all way through, the concept is good, the jokes are funny, but you really really really REALLY should add more music to it, or maybe even voice-samples.

"Paper Skywalker" appeared to me to be the best scene.
...and I guess that's only because it contains nackground-music.

So, if you would add more sound to it, it would get a better score.

The graphics are OK for this being your first submission.

I can't wait for the next episode.

Very funny submission, graphics were good, keep up the good work.

So-so.

It's a very lovely concept. The graphics weren't good, but not horrible. Needed more sound, simple background music would have done fine. It's interesting, but has a lot of room for improvement. I look forward to the next one.

Bad but could be better

The main problem with this one is the Pace.

You got some good jokes , but you need to increase the JPM or Jokes Per Minute.
Many of the scenes need to be trimmed to 1/2 or 1/3 of the lenth.
Sometimes you just sit and watch the same boring thing, wondering when will this scene end?!

The worst part is that it plays the scenes two times, so the second time it is even more drawn out.

You got good ideas and good jokes. Just try increasing the Pace of the film a little.

Work on it

I liked the general idea, but your graphics could be better. As far as audio goes: it would be better if you had more audio, try recording voices or putting in background music. Also the sound of the light saber could have used some work.

I hope that doesn't discorage you too much, I liked the idea and I would like to see fallow up episodes.