its ok...

mabe u could make the frame-rate higher to make is smoother and faster... and put more effort into it!

Tragic Story, Tragic Everything Else Too

Interesting concept of a youth trying to find worth by slaying another and when he fails, slays himself. I like tragedies but this just needs a lot of work. It looks like a rough draft or a story-board that's meant to be used as a guide for the finished project. The white on black drawings are good. It would also be good to set up some background on who the characters are and why they're at odds. The music seems unusually upbeat for such a sad story too. I would say it's out of place. I encourage the author to do this again only with alot more effort. It's worth something, it just needs to be finished. The horse was let out of the gate too early.

Not horrible

The only reason I liked it was because the music set a good mood. THe drawings weren't horrible either. BUT! The text wasn't up long enough. I could read it barely quick enough and I can read faster than almost anybody I know (there are a lot of dumbshits out there that barely know how to read and most of them go to newgrounds. That's a big drawback for this site). The story line was pretty stupid too. I am really only basing the good of this review on the mood. Which after watching it twice wasn't THAT good. Now for the scoring. I give you a 4 on the review and since 4 out of 10 is 40%, and 40% of 5 (the scoring panel) is 2. You get a 2.

Not good...

This wasn't so great. The storyline was very weak and under-
explained. But I think you could do well someday

ummm

The music grooved. The rest of it, well, didn't.