hm..
i didnt like it. the story is alright but the graphics suck and the ending is so pointless... unless you make a sequel?
well thats my 2 cents ;S
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Colourless Chapter 2 is alot shorter than Chapter 1, and it mainly focuses on her murdering, in the next chapter she will be on a head on collision with the full plot of Colourless.
Cool story
Well, the story was interesting enough, but If you really took some time to invest in your drawing skills, this could be really kick ass. Practice up, sticks don't belong in this. Could be really neat.
Some Good , some bad,
Liked your style, but i found it really difficult to read the text. and your sound didnt stop at the end of the movie so when i tried to re-watch it to understand what was written i had two tunes overlappin ...ya na...well do ya na. ya na wa a mean?
Whew...
That was a really great flash. It's sort of depressing.
odd.. but good
that was a very good flash. i hope you make more like this. but maybe you can change the font, I couldn't read half the stuff that was written. But otherwise good job