I like it! Start of something beautiful, i'm sure.

Heh... not bad.

It seems like your second door on the first screen is broken. That aside, I kinda enjoyed running through the dungeon. It was nice to see a couple mini-games if you took a wrong turn as opposed to just a Game Over screen... Nice dancing stick guy at the end. I liked a lot of the music you used for the various screens.

A moderate effort. 3/5

What can I say?

Although it did entertain me for a while it was a little basic, not that I'm knocking you're skills but you may want to expand it whenever you have spare time and do a sequel, more doors, more paths, more shooting sections like that one at the end. It would extend playing time from two minute to maybe twenty?

Right, so.

I'm not sure how to feel about this. On one hand, this is obviously something you've put work and thought into. On the other, maybe you didn't put enough time or beta testing into it.
It's visually appealing as far as the standard colour-to-colour gradient shading goes. However, that's not enough to please the average player, especially on Newgrounds. This might be an amusing little toy to put on a personal site, but I'm not sure it has a place here. Why is that? Too many bugs, too many opportunities to get stuck, and it's just not well-polished.
For the purpose of amusement, this is a cute idea. Doors leading to doors that occasionally lead to a treat. Always a hit with the lab rats. However, for the purpose of an outright game, perhaps not so good. There should be more goals, more things to collect, and perhaps more options when one clicks. And fewer doors that lead to the pool.

Kinda crappy

Few things wrong. There were a few places where the sound replays over itself. After you play the arcade game the little things you shoot stay on the screen.

Maybe if you made more rooms, or minigames it might be better. Might wanna touch up the graphics too.. they are kinda 1/2 ass.

Try a little harder next time.