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Lol how you mixed up your style alittle more in this flash. I love how you had the flash files scattered all around the floor, but was there any real life item they were meant to symbolise? I thought that you could have had the subtitles setup differently as it seemed alittle untidy, maybe having them in a black bar down the bottom. I like your corpsegrinder character when he is drunk you wrote some golden quotes in this short. I would love to see you use alittle more animation and move your characters around. Overall your verbal humour really stoodout in this short and came off very well.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)