bad sound
the animations were acually half decent but...
you need to try and get better voice quality
it just totally ruined it for me...but keep it up
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Guys im sorry i give up...I've been at this for an hour now and nothing i do works....your just gonna have to deal with it....no matter what i do, its like it doesn't even effect the damn thing!
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ok, i tryed to fix the sound so hopefuly it will work and the mouths will move with the voices...
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ok...umm this is my FISRT real flash other then a few shorts that i will submit later...
anyway,
this is the fisrt episode of a cartoon series that im doing called The adventures of lightboy. its about a 13 year old kid (based off of me) gets super powers and becomes the "Hero" of chicago...ummmm...one again..this is my first try at animation (well with something over 30 seconds long..) and my first animation with voices...
oh and if the sound is off, its because i posted it on DeviantART fisrt...and they mess up the sound so...yeah...
hope you like it!
wtf?
wtf just happened, see what you mean about the mouths, but i can see what u were tryin to do and it seemed gd, and i liked the bit when the guy bit the dog...
pretty good...
Apart from the poor attempt at ripping of spongebob.
Lightboy14 responds:
how the hell is this a rip off of spongebob?
Not bad :D
K, for a first attempt, this is pretty good. ur artwork shows u hav wot it takes 2 go further.
Just improve on the voices, they bad quality.
Also make it more original and longer!
Good try! :D
Lightboy14 responds:
haha thanks! i know its too short and i have a crapy mic...im hopeing to get a better one soon..the next one will be longer and better...i hope^^;
uh...
the sound ruined it. it was out of sinc and really bad quality. It was unclear what exactly was going on. you need to put the sound in while you are animating so you can animate around the sound. make sure everything is at a good clear pace. the animation was decent and the graphics werent bad but it was poorly put together. keep trying.
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