This is a new Gothic style online comic about how a girl who lives in the world with the colour stolen wants it back, and how she'll go to any lengths in the end to get it back.
go to http://www.miseryboutiqu
e.com/ this is the art that inspired this comic.
Hmm...
Not bad. I think you relate to some other people. (I don't mean actually
losing their color)
But, I think you need to change the text to a more clearer font.
Also, you shouldn't make the text go across the scene from
the right. That way you can't read it properly. >:(
It was good, but not convincing enough to watch the other
episodes or pages.
It was good but...
It was well done but its not my cup of tea. I prefer things a little less somber. Still i thought it was decent non the less
Not Bad!
I liked this, but I feel it could be so much more than what you gave us. I like the story idea, but just feel like maybe you rushed it a little too quick. I look forward to seeing more, though!
Not that bad
Kind of reminds me of that old HG lewis movie "color me blood red" about the artist who kills people. They used to make a lot of movies about artists killing people.
It needs some help
Well that seems like a good start to something better. But a few things: Have the text scroll from the right, easier to read
It was a bit slow, if the scenes were more detailed it could make up for it.
The sound was off at the end.
And don't worry, if you make your point quickly it's still made and could be much better. It seemed to drag on a bit.
Good luck, I'll watch your second one.