It's pretty much just part one with sound
I've already watched and reviewed part 1 of Scarce Reality.
Author Comments
Due to people's idiotic complaints about the "MATRIX RIP" (*widens eye's and covers mouth*) I decided to make my movie a horror movie, please enjoy and uh dun forget the popcorn eh? P.S: just a reminder, this is a preview, and it is a horror movie.....ty...and Have A Hectic Day....
ok preview
For a preview, it sure has a lot of moving text. Oh wait, now I see something...nice drawings (black n white), good music/mood.....well that's a good start.
:D
i liked it baby.
Needs work...lots of it...
Firstly, the beginning credits are too long. Yeah yeah, we know you made it. But you don't have to say each individual job and put your name under it. Just simply make it easy and say "Created by: [enter name here]". Secondly, the sound needs lots of work. Get a better microphone, that'll help a lot. Also, work more on the dialogue. It seems to be lacking. As for the drawings and graphics, it too needs work...maybe add some colour, too. Or atleast make it darker. If it's suppose to be a horror, make it dark and mysterious. There are tons of things that need work...but I guess I could say it has "potential".
scarce responds:
well i appreciate your way of stating what you thought was wrong, unlike some people, but I'm going for my own style, I don't want to add color to it, I don't even color my drawings, I'm doing it this way cause this is what I likie, as for the voice over I'm planning on removing it due to shitty mic, but other than that it's staying the way it is, as for the dark thing, don't worry, this is just the beginning, things get alot better and grusome, by the way, Have A Hectic Day :P
creative and a style of your own, great!
ah, ok, so i must admit that i was lost, but that is what i almost thought the point was, do you see what you really see, and do you always know what reality is, i just makes me think, so overall i really liked it, i am in awe of the movie, i cant wait to see more of your work, and never stop doing what you are doing cause it is great, and you make people think and that is the best thing someone could ever do is challenge the mind.