Pathetic.
Brilliant. Where am I?
Author Comments
After varying feedback and hurtful yet constructive criticism, Jeff and Maurice are making a comeback! I have taken negative comments such as 'blam this piece of crap' and 'eat shit you shit eater' and turned it around to create what I feel is my best flash ever!
That was a serious piece of mastery
haha. Nothing new, but the graphics are way too low///
not bad
it was an alright short animation. still, i think it could've been a little longer overall though, but it was still a nice little flash nonetheless.
boxpilot responds:
ill make sure the next one is much longer, just for you
Haha, I liked this.
This just goes to show you that simplicity can be a tool in and of itself. Short, sweet, and humorous.
The lack of some sort of musical background, however, hurt the overall style of it a bit. If I were you, I'd add some sort of old-timey, honkytonk piano theme ala old Silent Movies. I'd recommend against voices of any kind, however; the expressiveness of your text is part of what made this for me.
Oh, and by the way; I got the savior animation on your submission, here. Hallelujah!
boxpilot responds:
I thought of the same honkytonk piano when music was first suggested! Thanks for the saving and everything, kind of inspires me to make more..
Good
I like this a lot. I liked the animation. The only bad things was no sound. Even if it had some background music, It would've been a lot better.
boxpilot responds:
glad you liked it, ill really make sure to put in sound next time