keep practicing, good job
afcorse u can use some practice drowing
but ur animations great, how long it took u?
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the prodagy of western legend had to witness the murder of his father at a young age.Since then he has devoted his life to tracking down and ultimatly avenging his dad.
Bestwestern 1 and 2 are not on ng.They can be seen at i-animations.com though they are quite poorly animated.I tried my hardest on part 3.
I apologise for the shortness.Next week i will remake all 3 into one long animation.
Please tell me how i can improve this for the longer version.
I don't care wot any1 says, i still like bw3!
hey memartyo when is the whole thing gonna be ready that's wot i wanna know. although the holidyas r over, this 1 has taken u ages! I don't care wot any1 says, i still like bw3!
Not too bad, Not too good
This was a pretty average submission in my view. I thought the 'click the gun to shoot' bit was pretty pointless but i still liked it.
piefi responds:
yea i was kinda dissapointed with it myself.I have started "the real bestwesteern". This has a major update on graphics plot and length.hope you enjoy it.
um... ok
ok now to be honest this isnt that good but it has a decent story and is semi-interesting
however u have many problems with it. I would suggest to try to improve to animation a little more because frankly it was kinda choppy
and was it just me or did every other sentance have the word 'kill' or 'killed' or 'killing'
the song was good though you have some potential i think you should work a bit harder
piefi responds:
thanks i have taken your advise and improved animation also minimised the use of kill n the real bestwestern.
euh..... suggestions
Length, backgrounds, better story, voices.
piefi responds:
okay i will
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