Too short
First I had to turn it up to hear the gay guy voice. The dialogue was ok, it needed somethign more, sure he meets him, but needed eitehr some humor or some insult to go along with it.
It needed to be a bit longer, show some background story what the guy with Oreko was there for.
The gay guy legs looked freekishly long, everyone arms looked a bit long also. Couild use a little more work.