Great!
This was pretty great for a first flash! I like the concept and the art, as well as the animation and song. However, I felt there should be a background or setting, and the explosion could be better.
Author Comments
This is my very first flash movie that I have ever made outside of school. I know there is honning and stuff to do but, hey, I have the rest of summer to do this... Anyways this flash movie was made froma friends qoute that she says which is the title of this movie! Enjoy!
not bad for your first flash
you could of made the grapics more better and could made it more longer but this is a good flash for a beginner.
keep up the good work!
not to bad
For your first flash it really isn't to bad, just work a little on the animation and the story. Good luck on the next.
First, NO PRELOADER...
THERE IS NO EXCUSE FOR THAT!!! NONE!!!
3.4MB for a 30 second flash? WDF?
Oh, did I forget to mention it doesn't have a preloader?
Let's see, 3.4MB+NO PRELOADER+30 second flash=BLAM...
Darkcloud14 responds:
ok... THIS IS MY FIRST FLASH! GEEZ!
Great start!
I think it could of been better [longer, an ending that wasn't literal.....] but it was a good flash. things will only get better with time. So.... i really liked the music!! the graphics had really good style, the were different (in a good way) but in any case like i said things will only get better with time
4 out of 5 Great Job!
~Matt~
Darkcloud14 responds:
Thanks for the comment, before I submit anything else, I'd better hone a lot of skills