This is trailer for a movie I may complete in the near future. It's all mouse drawn (except for the concept art). Enjoy the flash.
Not bad, I guess....
As far as trailers go, it was "ok"..
Critique:
1. Try to make it faster..
2. Add more animating in it besides tweening..
3. Blood was okay, but it may look a lot better if you zoomed in on it more and then brush...Using only the mouse is "no" excuse. I make pretty good art with the mouse on the computer..I don't use graphix pens though...*Sigh*, but I wish I did...lol
Other than all that, it was awesome!
Keep up the good work Tention!
K
^^Good Points^^
As far as trailers go, this looked pretty good. I thought the graphics were very well done, especially since drawn completely by mouse. The blood looked fairly realistic, and didn't look cheap. The storyline you portray in this seems to be very interesting to watch, hopefully you release the full version.
^^Needs Improving^^
Animations could use a bit of work. Your animations seem to be mostly just tweens in this or simple MC's.
not bad
it was kind of good. it needs to be faster and more action. show us how they mutated to evil then u got something, later it might be a movie
That was amazing , i sarcastically loved it!!!
you need to work on everything, its just not ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,good!
i would say "make a flash before you critisize"...but it looks like you actually made a flash. and it was damn near the dumbest thing i've ever seen.
Could have been amazing
It's a shame you have to draw with a mouse. You're skills are still noteworthy none the less.
I want you to consider Artists for Armageddon. There is a thread in the crew forums,
great work,
Empsychotis (animator)