wasnt that bad
just need to improve on the graphics and more action like what fisher does in the games hes in. like kidnaps one of the employees and interrigates nim/her to find where are the watermelons or something. or goes on the ceiling and harrpoons a kantoloope. i can offer you more but not at the time. i can offer you help. you can reply if you want authors comment or mailing if newgrounds have it and these accounts ill keep checking