It was all right
But you could've put in the song itself
Well, this is my second submission to Newgrounds, and it's still just old stuff of mine (expect NEW stuff in the near future!). This claymation is ALOT better than the first one I submitted, with the exception that the lip syncing is a little more off in this one (I diden't realize a flapping jaw woulden't work well, lol). Also, its not the entire song, its only the opening "dad screaming at kid" opening seen in the Twisted Sister music video. Enjoy!
(On an interesting side note, I actually did start doing the song, but when I played it back it looked like crap, so I completely cut it from the movie)
*update* I changed the title, because that what the title was originally supposed to be. :P
It was all right
But you could've put in the song itself
TWISTED SISTER!!!
man i love those guys!!! i saw them live in greece last summer and they kicked ass!!;)
keep up the good work man! its nice to see stuff like this one in newgrounds...
too mean!
come on man this was so mean. I don't get it!
Mean? WTF does that,er, mean? What was mean about it? Was it offensive or what?
good
I'm not just sayin this because i'm in canned flash and i know u but i cant even imagine makin a claymation so i give ya a 10
Thanks! Mentioning that you know me WILL make people suspicious, though. :P
BTW: Who are you?
Slight improvement
Its marginally better than your previous one but thats not saying much is it. Mouth flapping isnt lip syncing unless your going to have different mouth shapes then its best to omit it. It doesnt affect the film too much when there's no lip sync but when there is and its done poorly its very distracting.
Also dont put the ng preloader against a white background because the loading bar is also white so its inivisible, i made the same mistake too.
Well, you pointed out everything I had stated in my description, so I agree with you on the mouth flapping. Also, alot of people in here don't even use lip sync, then just make mouthless faces (like you said) so I'm still going to do it, distracting or not. ;)