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The Voyager: Prelude

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Hi there.
This movie is a prelude for a series of six episodes, based on a sci-fi story. The main character makes his appearance in the episode one.
(Prelude: An introductory performance, event, or action preceding a more important one; a preliminary or preface).

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Wow, the guy that reviewed before I did said it all, and then some. I'd just like to add that I hope you speed things up in your next flash, and perhaps add some depth to the whole thing, since apparently you're going to be making a whole lot of 'em. I'm saying this because I doubt this flash is going to manage to not end up in the obituaries, and it would be quite sad if 2 in a row of your flashes were blammed.

Johny-DePato responds:

Thanks for your review, and for your score. I see you appreciate the sound fx, thank you.

Missed it ...

Sorry, I fell asleep twice. I see what you are trying to do here, but it just isnt workin for me. It takes, on average, about 30 seconds to figure out what you are
looking at after the change of each scene, which is too long to be staring at the same thing, some peoples flashes arent that long. The whole 'Signs' feel you were going for was crushed by the fact that there was no depth to you imagery. Then right there at the end you get torn from your sleep by these completely terrible sound fx of a man yelling that was on a totally different level than the sound of the rest of the movie. The only reason Im taking the time to write all this is because I know that its going to get by with something just over a 2 because you said a few magic words like '6 part series' and 'sci-fi' and people just 'cant wait until the first part comes out'. From a flash perspective, nothing new or interesting, pretty boring ... from a film perspective, which it looks like you were trying to accomplish here, I would have to say that it just wasnt very good.

--MindHacker

Johny-DePato responds:

Thanks "MindHacker". I must say I love your nickname. And you seem to be a nice & beautiful person. Thanks again for such a delightful review.

hmmmboring,but

the graphic are niceso i guess it will do pretty well

The whole movie is slow.

Framerate is just a little too slow, but the lighting detail is good. Hopefully the next one will have a slightly faster framerate.

Johny-DePato responds:

Yeha, it seems Im going to have not only to speed up the framerate but actually the whole plot. Thank you.

even for a first try

it was pretty poor, the action was verrrrrrrrrry slow, make things faster and cut the bullcrap about getting out of a car, the tree was unconvincing and the flash up alien? maybe some retard will bite that but not people used to seeing flashs like this, BLAM'D

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