:P
hmm it seems kinda choppy o.o maybe u can remove sum seconds on the second per frame thingy :P
other than that its GOOD ^-^
love love love
Author Comments
*Update* thankyou very much. Please stay posted. this file was made when i started using flash about 2 month ago. I never got round to finishing it because i started on a new project. I'm halfway through the new project, and thanx to all the reviews I have greatly improved my new flash animation. keep an eye out for "Pretty Baby" coming soon!
This was basically my first try at flash so I'm not too bothered if you think its rubbish or watever. this was my first try, I got kinda bored halfway through so i cud it short. and this is not my full potential, keep posted for more of my stuff.
A savior... thank the heavens...!
Finally - after sifting through tons of flash, and feeling that most of it was made by no potential authors who say "go easy on it, its my first flash" - I come upon this flash - you can tell that the animations a bit shaky - couldve been better - but no matter, this is one of the better flashes I've seen in the portal. The drawing talent was spectacular - while most of the first time authors you see around here make cruddy stick figures who shoot fake guns... this is talent here- I look forward to the series!
Rinoa-angel responds:
Hey, your review was a real uplifter, Like i was sayin I'm new to flash. You really helped me get a bit of motivation under me! I'll keep up the gd work aslong as u stay as friendly and cool as u seem!:) P.s I'll try my best!
dude not bad
i was pretty impressed of this if its your first man ur good but like the last guy said you should have place it bigger like 24 and yeah i give it 3.5 on 5 but ill put it to 4 cuse i rock
Rinoa-angel responds:
thnx, I made the changes. Hopefully u'll keep an eye out for my new project "Pretty baby" am halfway through doing that and am tryin my best 2 make it 100% Under watchful Eyes of Dim and JT From "decline 3" - any more tips Greatly appreciated!
wow! keep up the good work
great work on the graphics! the sound could have been a bit better as well. and one sugestion, i think you had the frame rate set at 12, it made the fading in and out a bit choppy. next time try 24 or somewhere around there. other than that great job and i cant wait to see the final piece!
Rinoa-angel responds:
heya thnx! I've made improvements 2 the frame rate like you sed. I also added these improvements to my current mini project! hey let me know if you wanna talk on msn messenger! I appreciate the help! :D
nice
you inexperience with flash show by the poor animation but your ability to draw more than makes up for it. I wouldnt be suprised to see your future work on the front page