After seeing Frank Millers Sin City, I got an idea for a comic, and during my english exam (which i passed) i had a choice of essay, short story, or comic. obviously i chose comic and i came up with this...and this is almost the exact same thing as my comic accept i added a few things, such as alternate endings.
hope you enjoy.
-johnny
Good Stuff
Alright Johnny Boy, I have to say you've come through with another good flash. Though as it has been said before the sound quality sucks arse...but since you have a crappy mic it can't be helped too much. Keep up the good work and I'm hoping to see Dungeon Shorts III come out soon!
suprice
happy birthday
great work but nedds work on the sound
and then a guy came and shot them all
Great work, just one thing wrong with it...
The sound quality was shocking. I could hardly hear, let alone understand, the dialog. If it weren't for that it would have gotten a higher score.
Eh...
If you enjoyed the movie, I reccomend the comics. They're breathtaking. You can get em' on amazon, or at a local comic shop, or whatever.
As for the flash, it was okay. It's nothing I'd watch twice, but it was good. The voice acting was a little forced, but then again, I haven't ever seen a flash with perfect voice action. Good plot, though.
3/5...bling.
Pretty good...
The voice was too quiet, and fell silent when background noises overlapped. The idea was cool, though not very sinister. I think if you do a longer, darker story, and take more time to do the sound, then you could be onto a winner. The music at the end wasn't bad, but the whole thing just seemed too short.
yeah....my mic is really shitty i need a new one and ill re-record it to make it better.