Bored me to death, wait im still alive. -whew-

This did not look right at all...
Graphics were all shifty and shitti..
The second guys walking scene bored me to death, i thought it was on a loop or something!
Well this really could use some major improvements, like improvement it can learn in the graveyard :)

nice

but it looks like you drew everything in a different program and imported it into flah,why the hell would you do that? flash has great drawing abilities

Needs work.

It has some merit, but the lines were very rough (easily fixed by the smooth option in flash), the animation was slow and unbearable, and I could see where the guy had absolutely no legs when he ran away. Fix the lines, the choppy animation, and the fact that your guy has no legs (also, the way the background moved looked iffy). If you can fix those, it'll be 100x what it is.

art's good, work on your animation

You can draw man, but you really need to up your frame rate. People don't move that slowly, the running speed seemed less than a normal walking speed. I dunno, maybe you just set the frame rate wrong or summat. Also, you need to have more happening than just that, coz really that's not much. Keep at it man.

PEOPLE DON'T WALK THAT SLOW, MAN!

Jeez, did you even watch this thing before you submitted it? They guy with the trash, i couldn't make it past that seen...1. people move faster than that, make your flashes realistic...2. i don't want to sit around waiting for something to happen while i watch some moron walking incredibly slow. As far as the rest of it, i dunno, but i didn't care for it because of the beginning. A good flash has things always happening from start to finish.